Many years ago,it was completely different from now . Formerly , people lived in an old and poor houses. The pollution was serious, rubbish was seen everywhere and it wasn't convenient to go anywhere at all. But now, China has been transformed.We live in tall and modern buildings and more and more people have already bought their own cars.what around us is the clearer sky and more green trees. What is the huge change?It's technological development!Chinese Shenzhou VII spaceship was launched successfully!!!It's exciting.
In the end, welcome to China!!!
I am pride about who I am!!
ReplyDeleteWow, Qian is right: you guys should feel proud (oh, we can say 'I feel PROUD ABOUT...' or 'I feel PRIDE IN...'). China is an amazing country with a fascinating history and an exciting present. I'm really looking forward to visiting at some point in the near future.
ReplyDeleteYou're right Wendy, major changes have taken place in China and it has become a modern superpower in such a short time. An amazing transformation. Do you sometimes talk to your parents about how things used to be when they were young? It must be really interesting to compare the different generations.
Once again, this is a great blog posting, with great ideas and a lot of fantastic language. Check out a few things:
- be careful to check your work carefully before posting (e.g. 'china' in the first line needs a capital 'C').
- 'discuss about what change of China'. After 'discuss' we don't use 'about'. Try 'I'M GOING TO DISCUSS THE CHANGES THAT HAVE TAKEN PLACE IN CHINA'.
- 'it was COMPLETELY DIFFERENT from now'.
- Be careful. Use capital letters at the beginning of new sentences, e.g. 'We live in...'
- 'HUGE CHANGE' not 'hung change'.
- 'was launched successfulLY'.
Well done Wendy.