I really love playing badminton ! I've been playing it for 10 years. I always play it with my family.When we play it we feel happy! Why am I into playing badminton? What I like about playing badminton is it allows me to spend time together with my family. In addition, I think it's good for my health!
I like badminton too.Hope we can play it together someday. :)
ReplyDeleteBadminton is a very good kind of sport, nowadays is really populer many people playing that and I like it!
ReplyDeleteWendy your essay is good but I think you need write " FOR about 10 years"
Hi Wendy, great blog! I love the design and subtle choice of colours. Nice! Great post too. To be honest, I haven't played badminton for ages, but I used to enjoy it a lot in my school days. The problem is...I'm rubbish at it :(
ReplyDeleteYou use some great language here too. Just a couple of things to fix:
- 'know each other' should be maybe 'spend time together' because you already know your family!!
- 'On the other hand' is used to show contrast, so for example: 'London is a lively and fun city. On the other hand, it is pretty expensive' (one positive and one negative). In this case, you have two positives, so it sounds strange.
- 'Why I am' should 'why am I..'
Keep up the great work Wendy!
Badminton is one great game. i love to play against you in the future. Great blog by the way!!
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